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    Identify the source of the document. 1 Point.

    Do some researches on the newspaper the Sun. 2 points.

    What is the main topic of the article? 2 points.

    Read the article from the SUN. and post a comment with your name.

    What do you know about the artist Pink? 2 points

    Watch and give your opinion about the video. 2 points.

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    Comment on the contents of the video. Do you consider it: (11 points)

    too violent?

    too erotic?

    What would your opinion be of how far an artist can go?

    Can you think of other examples?

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    1
    R'emmanuel Zo
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:47

    The document is a article from the daily "the sun". 


    The Sun is a daily national  tabloid newspaper published in the United Kingdom.


    In the article, they talking about the new video clip by Pink (a famous singer). For many people this video is violent. They said in the article, they said that Pink tweeted what her mum's said when she saw the video


    "My mom, after seeing the new video... ‘Wow, honey. I'm speechless. And uncomfortable. No one can ever say you play it safe.’ Thanks, mama:)”


    Pink is a famous singer.


    For me, the video is violent because we can see them "se jeter", gripping and strangle.


     


    I consider this video violent.


    In my opinion they can go far to have a lot of fan everywhere, they can do anything for that.


    For example, Lady Gaga wore a dress of meat!

    2
    Smarouane
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:48

    This document is a extract of the popular newspaper "TheSun" . The Sun is not a serious newspaper that's why it put of the main topic the new clip of Pink "Try'' who we can see lot of violence and erotism.

    Pink is an American singer-songwriter, she sings pop-rock, pop and R&B

    As of 2012 she sold over 40 million records and 70 million singles worldwide.

    For me this video is shocking, we see violence and eroticism, i'm very speechless and uncomfortable when i see this kind of video, some artists might offend sensitive children like the new clip of Tyga "Make it Nasty"                       http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yJsO60C-6vI

    3
    Thibaut . :)
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:49

    This document is an article from a newspapper which is called ''The sun'' . the sun is an english newspapper and it's the most sell newspapper and  we can say that it's not a serious newspapper.
    The main topic in this newspapper is the new song by Pink , which is called ''Try'' because her song is a bit violent and erotic.

    Pink is an american actress and a Pop rock singer. She's 33. She has sold 40 000 000 Albums and 70 000 000 singles. she won 3 grammy awards.

    For me this video succeed in  making a mix bitween violence and erotic . In this video we can see that there are a man and a woman. They're fighting and kissing . it's a bit strange because we can't guess their relation . It's difficult to make the difference bitween the Man's feelings. When the man is hitting the woman we can see that he's stronger than the woman. I think that if it's for a sing an artist can be extrem because it could make a buzz for his song and he could win notority.

    An other shocking video : tyga ''make it nasty''  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yJsO60C-6vI&oref=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fresults%3Fsearch_query%3Dtyga%2Buncensored%26oq%3Dtyga%2Buncensored%26gs_l%3Dyoutube.3...6507.9421.0.9559.6.6.0.0.0.0.170.645.1j4.5.0...0.0...1ac.1.zLe6CXqRg40

    4
    Samantha L.
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:55

    The document is an article, and the source of this article is a web site The Sun.
    The Sun is a tabloid newspaper UK, the English-language daily the most sold in the world.
    The main topic of the article is erotic and violent new vidéo of Pink and this promotion.
    A realy name of Pink is Alecia Elisabeth Moore, it's an american singer and an actress, she was born the 8 september 1979 in Pennsylvanie. She winnig 3 Grammy Awards, it's a popular singer.
    For me, this video start gently, with love, and after, the video begins to be violent and little erotic. One moment Pink's boy friend kissing Pink’s breast. And an other moment it takes its clothing. But the moment, the most erotic is when the man deviates Pink's legs.
    The choregraphy put in scene a violence in the couple, and painting represents the wounds and pain. More advance video, more they are painting.
    One moment man strangled Pink, or he pushes her on the ground. But in other moment, this is Pink who pushes the man on the table with violence.
    At the final of video, they run and jump like a fight, but we don't see who win..
    My opinion whether an artist can go that far, is that it can probably do even worse in the violent or erotic scene. And worse, is that video is even children can see.

    5
    v alentin
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:55

    1 . the document is an extract who speaks of pink in the english newspaper the sun
    2 . the newspaper the sun is british , it's the dayli write in english who is the most sell in the world .
    it's at the tabloid format , there's about 8 500 000 reader but it's critisized
    3 . the main topic of the article is the  erotic and no descent new video clip of pink
    4 . i know that pink is a very trash american blond singer , she sang " so what "
    5 . i don't like pink's music and my opinion don't change with this strange video clip
    the comment

    for me this is a very strange video , i don't know what was pink thinking of when she imaginated it .
    i think that nowadays , singer just want to earn money and make the buzz , with a video like that ,
    pink is sure that many people will react , so , many people want to see the clip and she get her notoriety to sell her disc .
    i don't thought the video too violent because that's not real and it's in a choregraphy but it was shocking , a bit erotic , it was a strange erotisme .
    i think that she just make video clip like that to get more notoriety , more money or she is really strange and she must take drugs .
    i think that artist will go everytime farest , they want to shock people and captive them , like that they speak of them , it don't really shock but i
    think that singer like Pink , Lady gaga  that are very strange , they don't come from the same planet of me

    6
    abdelkaderl
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:56

    1.the source of the document is youtube.

    2.Sun is a new paper(magasin) of news,sport and celebrity.

    3.

    4. pink is a artist, celebrity know of USA.

    5.in my opinion: I m don't likethe video clip.

    7
    chloé quelderie
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:56

    The source of the document is a newpaper article on Pink, the singer in THE SUN.  The Sun is a daily national tabloid newspaper published in the United Kingdom. The Sun has the tenth-largest circulation of any newspaper in the world and the largest circulation of any daily newspaper in the United Kingdom. The Sun has been involved in a number of controversies in its history, including its coverage of the Hillsboroughfootball stadium disaster, falsely accusing Elton John of having had sexual relationships with rent boy, and its attitude towards mental health issues and homosexuality. The Sun was first published as a broad sheet on 15 September 1964. The main topic of the article is Pink, the singer, make a decent spread in her erotic and violent video. The article talks about the singer Pink, of her video provoking. It shocks his family and her public. Pink is thrown across the room by her muscly love interest, strangled and even takes a kick to the crotch. Pink, married in real life to motocross racer Carey Hart, returned to the day job. She is provocative. Alecia Beth Moore, better known by her stage name Pink, is an American singer-songwriter, musician and actress. She was born in September 8, 1979. 
    For me, the video it is very too provoking, there are much shoking and she uses human contact melee. I love the music but the video clips, who has much colors (so beautiful) but I think it should put much less shocking.
    In the video, there was very much colors (painting) which makes it very nice for the view because it is obvious. But Pink and hes partner hit a lot, put on the ground, throw ...There are many erotic because they kiss, they get on each other. She screams, she cries. I love the songs of this artist, but my videos are a little too provocative. sometimes she kisses girls, she drinks, she makes mistakes, it's not too cool. As she there are Lady Gaga, Katy Perry that are too provocative. Lady Gaga is worse than the other as it is almost naked in her videos.

    8
    Madinas
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:56

    The source of this document is a video from you tube
    The sun it 's a United kingdoms newpaper , it's a best , they talking about politics , forces , weather , sport , celebrities ...
    The arcticle talkt about pink's new video , theys explains how the video it's physical with moments of passion ,comments the video and a little her personal life.
    she says that make this video was her most fun time in her life.
    Pink it's a famous singer in the world with a particulary look she's a singer song writer musician and actress her real name it's alecia beth moore .
    Opinion about the video : I think it's very strange and interessante video we not see that everyday , the coregraphy was maybe dangerous but it's succed , they not fear to do that and i think the video attract everyone (news papers , peoples ..) . the video correspends good with the real life .
    Comments on the video : I think the video it's more violent that erotic because they fighting .Artist can do all for impress the people they want's do something exeptionnel and different but sometimes they must have limits and not go  too far because videos can be censured .
    an other example it's britney's spears videos "gimmie more" and shyy'm new video i think she's very erotic

    9
    zahira salhi !!*
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:56

    the source of the document is video of youtube , "the sun" it's a united kingdoms   new paper it's a best , they talking about politics ,forces, weather ,sport , celebrities ...the artcle talk about pink a new video clip , they explains how the video it's a physical mouvements and a moments very romantic and hot with dancer . i know about Pink (stylized P! Nk), whose real name is Alecia Moore Elisabeth is an American singer and actress, born September 8, 1979 in Doylestown, Pennsylvania (United States).  she has sold over firty million albums  and seventy millions singles  and won 3 Grammy Awards. in my opinion  the video is really abused because they are too many staging .first i think the video is between errotic and violence because it represents several things in a same video .yes i known a differents artistes as pink is shym in a new clip .

    10
    mauree-n
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:56

    The document is an article of tabloid newspaper “SUN”. The sun is a tabloid newspaper published in the United Kingdom, founded in 1963. The sun has the tenth-largest circulation of any newspaper in the world and the largest circulation of any newspaper in United Kingdom. The main topic of this article is a new video clip of Pink and his representation violent and erotic. Pink is an American singer and actress, born in September 8, 1979 in Pennsylvania. In my opinion this video clip is very beautiful despite his erotic and violent choreographed but at this day it is usual to see video clip like this. In this day every artist as like this, there Lady Gaga,....

    11
    CharlotteM
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:57

    1°_ The document is an article from the magazine "The Sun"
    2°_ The sun
    is a magazine, history, photos, Death, ect..
    3°_ The music of "Pink - Try" speaks of love, deception and love she may have lived. In the video you can see the passion in his gestures.
    4°_ The content of the video is my "abuse", the clip is a little too "sexual". For me, I think the clip is a little too daring! Violence is not violence but live choreography in the same theme (Combat)
    I love clip even if it dared, the choreography is good and I think it's original.

    12
    Muteba
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:57

    This document is an article from The famous magazine The Sun


    The Sun is a monthly American magazine of essays, interviews, short stories, poems, and photography.


    Pink is a very famous american pop  rock artist who is very known since the 2000's


    My opinion on Pink's new music video is that she did a close video who show an expression of maybe an old experience of life that she lived before. The song talk about love and desire and she didnt hide the passion in this video.


    The topic of this music video is to never gives up when it comes to love.


    For me the video is not violent at all but I do think that its not appropriate to a large publig because of the erotic contents.


    I Think that is normal for an artist to have excess sometimes in their music, besause an artist do his work with inspiration and not for always taking in count the public who will see his art. Thats why art is not loved by everybody, it can't be, because not everybody feel the art in the same way.


    I Think that Eminem and Rihanna loves to introduce controvercy contents on their lyrics or they video clip, those two artist talks a lot of their trash personal experiences on their music. Ex: Eminem - Lose Yourself, Rihanna - Love the way you lie


     

    13
    Malik lazzoun
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 14:58

     


    This document is a picture of a news paper which share the arrival of Pink,a américain RockStar which will be in a concert in Paris(Bercy) in april 2013


    After my rearesch ?i think that the Sun is a great nexs paper because in this nexs paper we can find a lot of information


     


     


    From my opignion ? I thik that is article is very not interesting, because this article talk about the singer shows of some impressive moves -At firt I think that the acrobatic dance in this video clip is vulgar and provocative      ,Second ,For my opignion this clip is not interesting because I heat the erotics choreographed bacause there currenthly a vulgair scene ,like a seemingly kissing pink's breast                                                                      

    14
    Hanffou Pia
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:40

    This document is a newspaper, who come from The sun.

    The sun is a newspaper similar to public,closer etc... The sun like comments about changes in Star's life or when something  different arrived like the new video clip of Pink.

    The main topic of this article is the new single "Try" and the video clip who is really strang because she dancing modern dance.

    Pink is a singer really popular because she very rude and she don't care about what people think, Her music style is pop rock.She also popular for her video clip with Lil Kim  Mya and Christina Aguilera for Lady Marmalade who did a great success.

    When i had watching the video i wasn't shock because it's totally Pink style, she always do unusual think and we know that American Clip are often more expressive than ours.But i can design the fact that people can be shock.

    I don't think this video is too violent  maybe it's a little bit sexual butother stars can do worst.I think it's a kind of arts because she use modern dance  which is a dance very expressive. And compare to her other video clip i think this one is soft but it's my opinion. I know some friends who could be shock.

    But i'm totally agree when people says that sometimes the artists go too far, they don't think that they'll be at the Tv and everyone including child will see their video clip,some artist are very hard and rude or sometimes too sexual to be at the tv  that why some video clip censorship

    For my lovely english teacher

    15
    Viktor Blach
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:43

    This is an article internet, extract from the sun newspaper.
    The Sun newspaper is a newspaper that talks about Showbiz, babes, celebrities, sport and racing, this is a magazine people.
    the main subject of the article is Pink. and her new video, which speaks for itself. (this video is Erotic and violent)
    Pink is a very famous singer. It demarque other. She mocks is that people think. it has its own style. it is known worldwide. she makes music rock
    In my view this video reflects the personality of Pink. it is violent and open. it is a message. This video captures our attention. I love her music .Pink and you see a boy is tearing, fighting etc. Pink has paint on it. it is in a house with a boy. they dance. they fight dancing.

    Yes it is violent. because it is seen to be shaken, to grow, we see angry

    It's a little too erotic, because it shows pink and boy in sensual positions. I think this video   is too shocking for young fan of pink.

    She can go far in this video but Pink is no more offensive than other artists (Britney, Madonna)


    16
    Opheilie
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:46

    The document is a video clip of "YouTube". Pink is the singer. Pink, of its real name Alicia Moore, was born in 1979 near Philadelphia. This song represents a feeling of teenager. We can meet this kind of situation every day. The girls ask the same questions as  "pink" in its song. The clip represents the words. This song is Incredibly real and full of heart.

    17
    Riyad Crincho
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:49

    This source of the document is a newpaper article who speak to the clip .
    He criticizes the clip pink, because it is similar to a scene erotic.


    The Sun is a tabloid newspaper UK, the English-language daily the most sold in the world.
    End of 2004, it has 3.2 million copies a day for 8.5 million readers.


    Main topic of the article is
    Pink puts on a decent spread in her erotic and violent new video.pink is a singer extrovert,
    she sings well and she loves life.
    This video is very expressive because it allows you to talk situations couples singing.
    I think she's a very good artiste for that.


    This video is violent and very erotic but she's realist with today society.
    When an artist is motivated he can go to prison to be heard. the artist involved are very
    powerful.
    Because they possess the monies and securities in general.
    Ther are many examples for the aretist like Jane Fonda , or same Angelina Jolie ..

    18
    Maxime Drique
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:50

    Identify the source of the document:
     This document is a song and his clip of the singer Pink which we can find on facebook.

    Do some researches on the newspaper the Sun :
    But now she is a real artist, she make her fifth album which manage to show a new tragic story.
    The single “Try” is a song of this album where we can see pink at a man simulate a fight, She want   to show to all people want too much women have to suffer.

    What is the main topic of the article?
    The main topic of the article it's about the violence in a couple.

    What do you know about the artist Pink?
    Pink is a punk-pop music singer, she had a hard past in her life and know make best use to show what's people have to suffer in the life, some people are death because of violence or isolation.Her parent's divorced when she was young and get drug problem. Pink is a committed artist.

    Watch and give your opinion about the video:
    This video show with the art of dance and music. The scene take place in a house, Pink and the man haven't all of them clothes.

    Comment on the contents of the video. Do you consider it:
    too violent?
    too erotic?
    What would your opinion be of how far an artist can go?
    Can you think of other examples?

    I think that this video is really sexual and violent but if you choc people she have to make something like this

    19
    clara delpage
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:50

    This article come from the newspaper who is name is Sun, the newpaper it's like Public in France. The objectif of this magazine it's to publish gossips of famous people, it's the most popular in UK. The main topic of the article it's a new video clip of Pink.

    Pink it's a trash famous singer who is 33 years old, she is knew all over the word. She come from USA, in the Doylestown city.  She is Knew in 2000 with her 1st album who is name is "Can't take me home".

    I think this new video it's too shock for younger fan of Pink because it's to mutch, to erotic, that represent violence against women, and we can see a man who making movements rough and who feigns a fight with her and also the man feigns positions very comprimising, we can say erotic, sexual.

    20
    Ayad Sarah
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:51

     


    This is an article or new video Pink is discussed. The source is documennt Newspaper












    the newspaper "the sun" is one of the most read newspapers and most sold






















    The main topic of the article is the new Pink or clip you can see that the young mother is still as shocking and without ardly





















    I know about the artist she is mom today and it is a good mom, she loves music and she does a lot of work that




















    ove hard and shocked people. But everything is in reasonable. For me, the boy is a bit too muscular for my taste, but the dance they both do well and they will give a little sensuality clip.





















    think the clip is a bit too shocking for the audience, it is underwear throughout the clip and dance sensually, this is not a clip what parents let their children watch it.












    I think that nowadays artists believe that by shocking clips, they will have more and more buuz fan

    21
    Paiige Profil de Paiige
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:51

     


    Video of pink


     


     


    The source of document is youtube.


    In this video i see Pink ( it's a singer ) who is married and they simulate a violent fight. I see a acrobatic dance and a moments of passion.


    The main topic of the article is" Pink puts on a decent spread in her erotic and violent new video ".


    Pink was born in 1979, today she has got 33 and her full name is Alecia Beth More.


    She is an American singer-songwriter, musician and actress.


    This video it's good because she speak a relation a couple ( passion and fight ), it's very beautfiful because he had a lof of color in there person, it's a video artistic.


    I think it's more a erotic video than violent because it's a erotic choregraphed for see the intensity in progression of couple.


    She defends her ideas because it as a commited singer, she refused a limit and provocated.


    Other example : Shy'm and Rihanna

    22
    Hajar La Crinche
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:52

    The document is an article of the newspaper, The Sun.
    The Sun is published in the United Kingdom. It's the first newspaper on the English market.
    Alecia Elisabeth More aka Pink is a American singer and actress. she was born in the 8 september 1979, she has 33 years old. Her musical style is the pop, pop rock, pop punk.
    Is an article about the singer Pink.


    For me, this video it's for the teenagers, the girls take the same questions.

    23
    Cardon Anne-Sophie
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:52

    The document is an article who is publish in the SunNewpaper the10th October 2012.
    The Sun Newpaper is borned in 1964 by Sydney Jacobson who was the first editor and He was tell « The sun is a radical newpaper »
    The main topic is talking about Pink and her new video clip. Pink is a rocker and she doesn't care if she shocks people. And She publish 6 albums.
    My opinion about this video, I think that is a good video with a choregraphy who is trace a love story.
    I don't think that the video is too violent because we don't see blood.
    Because There is painting replace the blood.
    The video is maybe a little bit so erotic.

    24
    Emma D
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:53

    The document comes from an internet article, it's a newspaper « The sun »
    The Sun is a monthly American magazine of essays, interviews, short stories, poems and photography. This magazine focuses on scandales and news about stars.
    The main topic of the article is the new video of Pink who is very violent and very erotic. Because in her video she appears dressed only in underwear, and there are also many scenes of violence with her man.
    Pink is a singer and actress known in the world I think. His videos are often daring and tries to expose and discuss topics.
    I found the music good but too violent and and erotic video. Even if her dancing is artistic.
    I found, to day, there are lot of violence and erotism evry where , and children are no longer protect.
    She could also wear other clothers.

    25
    Oceane Carpentier
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:53

    Identify the source of the document. 1 Point.
    The document is an article to Pink. He has posted by The Sun, on the website the  10th october 2012 « http://www.thesun.co.uk/sol/homepage/showbiz/music/4582677/Pink-new-video.html »


    Do some researches on the newspaper the Sun. 2 points.


    What is the main topic of the article? 2 points.


    The main topic of the article is the video of Pink (Try), someone find the video erotic, other violent.


     What do you know about the artist Pink? 2 points


    Pink (really Alecia Beth Moore)  was born  the 8 september 1979. She's 33.
    She's a singer of Pop, and an actrice very popular. Her parents are divorced.

    Watch and give your opinion about the video. 2 points.


    I feel that the video is good, because Pink is original to each clip. And I think to the clip corresponds very well with the lyrics.

    Comment on the contents of the video. Do you consider it: (11 points)


    I consider the video too erotic, because, Pink and her friend make sensual dance.

     

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    Emma D.
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:53

    The document comes from an internet article, it's a newspaper « The sun »
    The Sun is a monthly American magazine of essays, interviews, short stories, poems and photography. This magazine focuses on scandales and news about stars.
    The main topic of the article is the new video of Pink who is very violent and very erotic. Because in her video she appears dressed only in underwear, and there are also many scenes of violence with her man.
    Pink is a singer and actress known in the world I think. His videos are often daring and tries to expose and discuss topics.
    I found the music good but too violent and and erotic video. Even if her dancing is artistic.
    I found, to day, there are lot of violence and erotism evry where , and children are no longer protect.
    She could also wear other clothers.

    27
    regis ebatta
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:54

     


    The document is the video clip by pink taken from youtube and a article from the sun.


    The sun is a british newspaper .


    Article talks about violence and erotic in this new vedeo clip by pink.


    Pink is an american singer-songwrite, misician and actress she was born in septembre 8, 1979 in doylestown, pennsylvania.


    I find very original clip, because it is very rare to associate romance and violence.


    The clip is too violent because man does not stop the balance in every sense, one could speak of domestic violence.


    I think it is not rally dress

    28
    Callet Philomène
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:54

    The source of the document is a british newspaper.this newspaper is sold in the world. In July 2011, the Sun publishes seven days on seven


    the main subject of the article is the new album Rose.she is dressed only in underwear, it simulates a violent fight with her lover. Pink is therefore a scandal in the press.


      


    The clip is beautiful. she dances well too. the clip is original. Their fierce physical scuffle is peppered with moments of passion, giving rise to some erotic choreographed routines.


    I find the video quite violent because there are scene where Pink is strangled. During the stormier segments of the video, Pink is thrown across the room by her muscly love interest, strangled and even takes a kick to the crotch.



    The clip shows the violence against women

    29
    Nassim hssaine
    Jeudi 11 Octobre 2012 à 15:55

    This document is an article of newspaper , it's a sun.
    The Sun is the most popular newspaper in United Kingdom, it's was published on 15 september 1964 for first time.
    it's has much influence in politic in united kingdom, it is a part of media empire of Rupert Murdoch.
    The main topic of the article is a new clip of Pink who is a scandal for a part of population.
    Pink is a singer of a united states of america since 1996, she mades few movie and much song.
    She is thirty three years. She has got few awards in her career.
    For me, this video is sensually but she can be shocking for a children. I think watch a woman half naked can be a source of anxiety for the most sensitive.
    We can see pink half naked in this clip who is erotic and violent with a partner, i think that is a evocation of female violence.
    The singer of hard rock make's me feel a topic of Pink

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